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My time in the water

My time in the water recount

 

WALT: recount a personal experience using correct sentence punctuation and sentences which make sense to the reader.

 

 

 

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7 year ago we went to this place which had a very long water slide and it had a bouncy castle along with it. I forgot what it was called but I still remember how fun it was when I went with my cousins and my family. It had been a very long time since I had slid on to it. I went down with my dad when we went down the slide I was making a sound when I went into the slide.

 

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Plant

Today I brought home a plant which a put seed that is called a pea it quite new I have watering it and keeping it warm because it gonna be the end of summer and which mean it going to be autumn and it going to be cold I actually didn’t make it on my own my friend John help me out he even let me bring it home which for me I got to be safe with it and keep the plant warm  and do the right thing with it.