My time in the water

My time in the water recount


WALT: recount a personal experience using correct sentence punctuation and sentences which make sense to the reader.





7 year ago we went to this place which had a very long water slide and it had a bouncy castle along with it. I forgot what it was called but I still remember how fun it was when I went with my cousins and my family. It had been a very long time since I had slid on to it. I went down with my dad when we went down the slide I was making a sound when I went into the slide.



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